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At First Sight

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Going out with friends
The stars shining bright.
Little did I know
my life would change tonight.

Driving along the boardwalk
showing off my car.
Will they like it?
The ride is not that far.

Walking along the beach
I saw his gorgeous face
The closer he came to us
the faster my heart paced

I strayed along a dream.
Did she know?
I followed her every move.
Beauty shining right through.

Something about his stare
urged me to look away.
Though I pretended not to look
My eyes could not help but stray.

Wanting to ask her.
Never did I dare.
I am Nothing but a loser.
For all I care.

My legs wanted to walk
my mouth wanted to speak,
But all I could do was gaze
like a gawking little geek.

It feels like I share this feeling.
Waves beating down on the shore.
Am I the only one appealing?
Just hide it no more.

His searching eyes told me
that I was not the only one
who didn't have the strength
to pull the trigger on the gun.

One small step away.
My path turned frozen.
From so many ways.
The cowardly was chosen.

So close to his touch
my fingers trembled with fear.
I drank in the sensation
of having him so near.

In need of some strength.
A push in the back.
Closed my eyes real tight.
Ready for this fight.

The blush of his cheeks
only made me want him more
I leaned in ever closer
to finally settle the score.

The struggle I put up with.
Against myself.
This time I would bury it
Lay it between the shelve.

With the touch of his lips
my heart began to soar.
My soul became as one
with this man that I adore.

Did I feel real love.
Did I feel it for the first time.
Is she playing with my heart?
Or is she really mine?

No more playing around
This is real true love.
I would be with this man forever
till our spirits rose to the skies above.

You are my queen.
Sitting on the throne
Wearing the crown.
You are the one, never let me down.

I will never forget this night
when the stars shone so bright.
When I met the man of my dreams
and our love for each other took flight.

My experience was poor.
You brought me real love.
When I met you on the shore.
You are my angel from above.
A whimmy collab with

Very sappy, but I like it. Reminds me of my younger years when I used to daydream all the time. I still daydream of course but only about Johnny Depp. Hes safe =P Anyway I had much fun writing with it since me and Robin have been wanting to do a collab for so long. The girl is written by me and the guy is written by Robin. If you don't know which is which, it goes back and forth with my stanza being the first. Enjoy!
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Apsinthion's avatar
i read it and was like huh...so when i finished it i read your commment thing and found out it was a collab and guessed hwat a collab is and understand it better :) lol its kool, ttly different i think..only thing i dont like is how some stanzas rythme and some dont...but thats just my opinion..still like it tho :)